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Old April 16th, 2007, 12:55 PM   #1
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Who am I ... ? Here is my story.

NIMUAES STORY




In the darkest reaches of the night

Nimuae tends her vigil fire alone

and sees again within its flames

the happy days that now are gone.

They were young then, she and her Lord,

and this forest was all their world.

They lived and loved there, unaware

of their fates to be unfurled.

Her gentle Lord awoke her heart,

taught her wisdom, truth, and love.

Lying sated in each others arms at

night they watched the stars above

and he would tell her endless tales

of how the zodiac was formed,

and of all the Gods that ruled the

sky, before the earth was born.



His loving soul touched her soul

as his kisses warmed her heart,

they truly believed they had forever,

that they never would be apart.

but, Queen Mab watched and envied,

her prowess was on the wane

and she hungered for Merlins magic

to make her strong again.

So Mab turned upon this forest

and invoked a closing charm

if Merlin once should leave here

then he never could return.

Mab set King against King, she

raised a cruel and bitter, bloody war,

knowing that Merlin was bound

to go, to defend his King - Arthur.



Nimuae could have warned Merlin,

could have begged for him to stay,

but knew his King had need of him

so she watched him ride away.

With her heart in a thousand pieces

she watched him - out of sight,

and saved all her bitter tears

for the long and lonely night.

Never more to feel the gentle kiss

that used to start and end her day.

Never more the arms so strong and

warm that kept the world at bay.

Never more to wake within those

arms after nights in loves embrace,

and never more to hear his voice,

touch his lips, or see his face.



Mab thought to entrap Merlin,

once away from Nimuaes care,

to seduce him into using all

his magick powers for her.

But Merlins heart was loyal

both to Nimuae and his King,

he turned his mighty will against

Mab and she vanished into nothing.

In the darkness of the forest

Nimuae tends her lonely vigil fire,

and hopes that Queen Mabs fall

will restore her hearts desire.

Now that Merlins tasks are over,

with Mab, and his King both gone,

may he now return to Nimuae-

or does the malice linger on ?



(C) Nimuae 2007.



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Old April 16th, 2007, 01:01 PM   #2
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Your poetry always flabberghasts me.



Consider my flabber ghasted.
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Old April 16th, 2007, 01:03 PM   #3
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Your poetry always flabberghasts me.


Yeah I couldn't understand it either
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Old April 16th, 2007, 01:05 PM   #4
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Yeah I couldn't understand it either


Likewise
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Old April 16th, 2007, 01:05 PM   #5
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The sacrifices of true love. Wow, that was beautiful.



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Old April 16th, 2007, 01:41 PM   #6
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The sacrifices of true love. Wow, that was beautiful.



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Thank you so much. I was not certain if the legend of King Arthur was popular over there.
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Old April 16th, 2007, 02:46 PM   #7
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It's lovely Nim.



Fairly true to Authurian style.



More please!
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Old April 16th, 2007, 03:48 PM   #8
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Thank you so much. I was not certain if the legend of King Arthur was popular over there.


Perhaps not as popular but still, well known and read.

And Nimuae, you simply must get published! You are a gift to others, bringing a dance of life to the words you write!



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Old April 16th, 2007, 04:07 PM   #9
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Perhaps not as popular but still, well known and read.

And Nimuae, you simply must get published! You are a gift to others, bringing a dance of life to the words you write!



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Quite, Nim is a top Poetry contributer accross the pond.
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Old April 17th, 2007, 02:23 AM   #10
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Excellent stuff, as ever, Nimuae!!!!
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